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Informational Text Analysis Portfolio
ok use these paragraphs but change up the words so the teachers are not suspisious of us 6th grade connexus academy gt la
“Hang on, Dolly!” is a short story written by Sally Lee. The central idea is to never give up and do not let fear stop you from achieving a goal. The information in the text is effective in informing the reader about the central idea because it provides detailed examples of not giving up. For example, Dolly was nervous to fly in a hot air balloon, but she did not look down on herself and succeeded in parachuting! “High-Flying Hero!” is also a short story and the author is Christy Mihaly. The central idea is that we can overcome and push through in tough times. The author effectively informs the reader about the central idea by providing details that explain the concept of pushing through pain. In this story, Chen the pigeon was shot in his chest and fell in the middle of the war, but he was able to work through the pain and fly to the base.
The author’s text structure and explicit details were effective in informing me as the reader about the topic. These stories gave great details and points that were easy to understand and helped me relate to the characters. I relate to Dolly and how she did not give up when I was in a spelling competition. I was nervous to be on stage with the whole school and parents watching me as I spelled out words, but I did not let my nerves stop me. I tried my hardest and I told myself not to be nervous and I placed 5th out of 30 people! I was unable to relate to the character, Chen however, the story great enough detail that I may be able to use in the future.
The point of view of Sally Lee is more effective than Christy Mihaly’s story because she provides more events, more detail, and more points that lead to the topic and central idea. Christy Mihaly on the other hand has less events yet has enough detail to explain the topic. The part of “High-Flying Hero!” where Chen got shot and plunged out of sight, it does not explain what happened next. The author could have done a better job thoroughly explaining this even. In comparison, in Sally’s story “Hang on, Dolly!” she explained the events in a way for me to understand what was happening in the events. Both stories are effective in informing about the topic, but Sally Lee’s story is more effective than Christy Mihaly’s Story.
I have that and got 100%
i will help you what do you need me to write for you?
What should I write
I need Help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i got only 2 paragraphs ill give u all 3 tomorrow
your welcome if -you don't get a 100% im sry if you do congrats!!!!!!!!!
thank you so much for the help mj
thank you sososososososo much
Bro, Thanks so much. Anyone else in 6th grade, I am currently doing the Predicting Weather Portfolio. Once I am done I will give you the full essay. Anyhow, MJ Thank you for the help. I will post that essay here on/before Thursday. Peace.
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Just change a lot of things because did your brother change a lot of things or not because one of my friends did the same thing for a test and portfolio but changed a lot of thing like the whole thing he pasted so it can become his and he pasted it from the internet that's more dangerous but he erased the college facts and information and made them with simple information and changed other things but he didn't get kicked out but then he hated it because of all of the portfolio's and test weekly so he left the school
i remend to only use it to help you get a idea what to write, dont fully copy it though.
THANKS MJ!!!!!
This is unexceptable behavior. Students here that have been cheating their work from here, will be getting a warning from the Connexus Staff Council. Your grades WILL be dropped down to a potential 0%. And that's for all subjects, if we find more answers. Students should be learning, and doing their work, because that is what helps you evolve in life in general. Please be responsible, and know that there is consequences for your actions. We will also notify parents of this.
"Hager Denise, Science Teacher at Connections"
Ok I just recommend using this only for a reference so that you know what you are supposed to do and you can use this as an example to help you write your own text. you shouldn't copy everything she does.
@ I dont support this true we can get expelled, but you don't know why people cheat the only reason why i cheat is because my brother died and i'm so back on lessons to the point where i need to or i'll be expelled from my grades the teachers don't care only want you to do ur best do it again a day later so cheating can help for standards and that is the only reason why i'm here
No No no nooooo you guys don not post anything like this you will get kicked from the school stop pls so you don't get kicked i'm in 7th and my brother got kicked by doing that DONT post anything like that!
I hope you kids know that us teachers have tools that will show us these same answers from the internet. If these are used, you will get a zero for the assignment. For those kids giving the answers, you're not helping but making a situation worse. Give ideas not answers.
Thanks, i have the informative text portfolio in 7th grade but i think this will also work. Thank you Mj.
guys, please DO NOT copy and paste. These people may be giving you permission but your teachers and parents/guardians are right when they say that this could lead to you working at a bad job. Don't you guys want a good life? Instead please just use this to give you inspiration. It will make you feel better about your work and you wont have to worry about getting a bad score. please just do your own work and only use this website to give you inspiration and check your answers. It will lead to a better future for you.
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what the heck is this site i will crush this site by my hand and all the dum dums get smart smarts.
I don't support this unexpected behavior u should go to hell for this!
use this but space it out a little
Hang on, Dolly is a story written by Sally Lee. The idea is to never give up and do not let fear stop you from achieving a goal. The info in the text is informing the reader about the main idea because it provides detailed examples of not giving up. For example, Dolly was nervous to fly in a hot air balloon but she did not look down on herself and succeeded in parachuting.High-Flying Hero!” is also a short story and the author is Christy Mihaly. The central idea is that we can overcome and push through in tough times. The author informs the reader about the idea by making details that explains pushing through pain. In this story Cheri ami the pigeon was shot in his chest and fell in the middle of the war but he was able to push through the pain and fly to the base.The author’s text and details were very good in informing the reader about the topic. These stories gave good details and parts that were easy to understand and helped me understand the characters. I relate to Dolly and how she was fearless. I was unable to relate to the character cheri ami however the story has great detail that I may be able to use in the future. The point of Sally Lee is better than Christy Mihaly’s story because she makes more events in the best detail and more parts that lead to the topic and main idea. Christy Mihaly on the other hand has less events but has enough detail to explain the topic. The part of High-Flying Hero where Cheri got shot and plunged to the ground it does not explain what happened next. The author could have done a better job explaining this event. In comparing, in Sally’s story Hang on Dolly. she explained the events in a way for me to understand what was happening in the events. Both stories are good in informing about the topic but Sally Lee’s story is better than Christy Mihaly’s Story.