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Please check grammar correctint comma splice sentences and need to use more the 1 method.

Original sentence: Unfortunately Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote,she died in 1906.

My corrected sentence:
Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.

Thank you in advance for your assists.

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April 30, 2011 12:27am UTC

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  1. Your correction is good. What other method are you going to use?

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    April 30, 2011 12:31am UTC

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  2. The following two:
    Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote. She died in 1906.

    Unfortunately, Anthony did not live to see the 1920 passage of the Nineteenth Amendment giving women the right to vote, because she died in 1906.

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    April 30, 2011 12:38am UTC

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  3. I'd add a comma after "Amendment" in each sentence.

    Other than that, they're just fine! Nice!

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    April 30, 2011 12:40am UTC

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  4. Thank you for your help

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    April 30, 2011 12:44am UTC

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  5. You're very welcome.

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    April 30, 2011 12:49am UTC

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