Use the sentence to answer the question.

Question

Use the sentence to answer the question.

We could go to the mall, or would you rather shop online?

In a paragraph, identify the mood shift and explain how to correct it.

(4 points) don’t make the paragraph long

Answer 1

The mood shift in the sentence is from offering a physical shopping option to suggesting an online shopping option. To correct it, you could simply rephrase the sentence to offer a balanced choice between going to the mall and shopping online. For example, "We could go to the mall, or we could also shop online. What do you think?" This way, the options are presented more evenly, and there is no favoritism towards either choice.