ADDING DESCRIPTIVE DETAILS:
Directions: Rewrite each of the following sentences by adding at least THREE (3) descriptive details. Think about the who, what, when, where, and why. Don’t forget sensory details (sight, sounds, touch, smell, and taste). Each sentence should be AT LEAST ten (10) words long.
11. My friend and I ate soup.
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12. Anna took her dog on a walk.
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13. Lucas cleaned his room.
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14. Abigail helped her mom bake a cake.
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11. My friend and I ate delicious, steaming hot chicken noodle soup together at a cozy cafe on a chilly winter afternoon.
12. Anna lovingly took her fluffy golden retriever, Max, on a leisurely morning stroll through the vibrant, blooming park.
13. Lucas meticulously cleaned his cluttered, dusty room, organizing his shelves and vacuuming every nook and cranny.
14. Abigail excitedly helped her talented mom carefully measure out flour, sugar, and vanilla extract to create a moist, decadent chocolate cake with rich, creamy frosting.