In this discussion, you will post an excerpt from your rough draft that you feel is a trouble spot. Along with the excerpt,
please provide some context or background information about why you are struggling with this particular section. This could include issues related to clarity, organization, flow, or any other element of writing that you are finding challenging. Once you have posted your excerpt and context, feel free to ask for feedback or suggestions on how to improve it.
Excerpt: "The protagonist felt a mix of emotions as she stood in the empty room. Everything felt surreal, like a dream. She couldn't believe that the events of the past week had led her to this moment. She felt lost and confused, unsure of what to do next."
Context: I'm struggling with this section because I feel like it's a bit cliché and lacks depth. I want to convey the protagonist's inner turmoil and confusion in a more compelling and unique way, but I'm not sure how to do that without resorting to generic clichés. I also want to show more of the protagonist's specific thoughts and emotions, rather than just telling the reader how she is feeling. Any suggestions on how to improve this passage would be greatly appreciated.