In three to four sentences, write a narrative paragraph that includes two transitions. The transitions should tell information about two of the following: what is happening when, where the action is happening, or whether time has passed between events...
As the sun set over the tranquil lake, the forest surrounding it was bathed in shades of orange and pink. The lakeside park was a peaceful oasis, with families enjoying picnics and couples strolling hand in hand along the water's edge. After exploring the winding trails and serene beauty of the area, I settled down on a bench to watch the colors of the sky deepen into dusk. As twilight descended, the soft glow of lanterns appeared, casting a magical ambiance over the park and signaling the start of a lantern-lit evening walk.
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At sunset, the serene lake sparkled as the forest glowed with hues of orange and pink. Families enjoyed picnics by the water while couples strolled along the lakeside. After exploring the peaceful park, I sat on a bench to watch the sky darken. Lanterns flickered to life, illuminating the park for an enchanting evening walk.