Use the paragraph to complete the activity.
The two children approached the cave cautiously. The interior looked dark and damp. Prodding each other gently, each child tried to get the other to enter the cave first.
In three to five sentences, rewrite the paragraph using dialogue to make the story more vivid...
"Hey, why don't you go in first?" whispered Sarah, nudging Timmy towards the cave entrance.
"I'm not going in there alone, you go first!" Timmy replied nervously.
Sarah shook her head, "No way, you go first!"
After a moment of silence, Timmy mustered up his courage and said, "Fine, let's go in together."
The two friends held hands as they cautiously stepped into the dark and damp cave.
replace the names with chris and jean. and simplify it
"Hey, why don't you go in first?" whispered one child, nudging the other towards the cave entrance.
"I'm not going in there alone, you go first!" the other child replied nervously.
The first child shook their head, "No way, you go first!"
After a moment of silence, the second child said, "Fine, let's go in together."
The two friends held hands as they cautiously stepped into the dark and damp cave.
change the setting
"Hey, why don't you go in first?" whispered one child, nudging the other towards the abandoned house entrance.
"I'm not going in there alone, you go first!" the other child replied nervously.
The first child shook their head, "No way, you go first!"
After a moment of silence, the second child said, "Fine, let's go in together."
The two friends held hands as they cautiously stepped into the dark and dusty abandoned house.