given the topic sentence and evidence: “to begin Zooz must prioritize wildlife protection in regard to the negative effects of the existing entertainment model which include altered animal behavior and breeding of non-threat species. Due to the zoos taking animals away from their natural habitat and placing them in small man-made enclosures many of them “develop neurotic and self harming behavior”, such as primates throwing or eating their feces, birds plugging out their own feathers, and tigers pacing constantly (Source A)” give commentary
The evidence provided supports the topic sentence that Zooz must prioritize wildlife protection due to the negative effects of the existing entertainment model. The evidence cites specific examples of altered animal behavior in zoos, such as primates throwing or eating their feces, birds plucking out their own feathers, and tigers pacing constantly. These behaviors are described as neurotic and self-harming, indicating a negative impact on the animals' well-being.
By including this evidence, the author highlights the detrimental effects of taking animals away from their natural habitat and confining them in small man-made enclosures. The examples of specific behaviors further emphasize the negative impact on animals in zoos. The author's use of the phrase "develop neurotic and self-harming behavior" adds a sense of urgency and importance to the need for wildlife protection.
Overall, the evidence provided strongly supports the argument that Zooz should prioritize wildlife protection, as the existing entertainment model has negative consequences for the animals involved.