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What revision, if any, should be made in sentence 15?
As the train rolled along, Esteban yawned, and he mindlessly flipped through it, a railroad brochure.
As the train rolled along, a railroad brochure was mindlessly flipped through as Esteban yawned.
As the train rolled along and mindlessly flipped through a railroad brochure, Esteban yawned.
No change is needed.
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