Use the paragraph to answer the question.

Question

Use the paragraph to answer the question.

Dear Hiring Manager,

I am applying for the position of summer cashier. I learned about this job from your advertisement in the school paper. I have experience working as a volunteer cashier at my club booth at the 4-H fair. I am friendly, a hard worker, and awesome at customer service. Thank you for your time and attention. I have attached my resume to this email.

Sincerely,

Anthony Jones

Which word should the writer change to maintain the formal tone of the email?

(1 point)
Responses

attention
attention

sincerely
sincerely

friendly
friendly

awesome
awesome
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Answer 1

The word "awesome" should be changed to maintain the formal tone of the email.

Answer 2

The word that the writer should change to maintain the formal tone of the email is "awesome".

Answer 3

To find the answer to this question, we need to evaluate the tone of the paragraph and determine which word is not suitable for a formal tone. The writer of the email is applying for a job, so a professional and formal tone is expected. The words "friendly" and "awesome" are more casual and informal, which may not be appropriate in a job application. Therefore, the writer should consider changing the word "awesome" to maintain a formal tone.