Use the letter to complete the activity.
Dear Hiring Guy.
I saw your job on the Internet, and I'd like to apply. I'd make a great summer custodian, because I love amusement parks, I don't have school in the summer, and I'm a really fun, happy guy. The job sounds really easy, so I'm sure I'll be fine. Besides, I'd like to earn some money to save up for a new game system. Let me know when you're ready for me to start work. I've included my resume with this email.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
In 3-5 sentences, rewrite Kurt's cover letter so that it uses formal language appropriate to the situation.
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Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across your job posting online and wish to express my interest in applying for the position. I believe that I would be an excellent fit for the role of summer custodian at your amusement park due to my passion for such venues, the availability of my time during the summer months, and my enthusiastic and positive nature. The job responsibilities appear to be manageable, and I am confident that I will excel in this role. Additionally, I am motivated to earn income for the purpose of saving up for a new gaming console. I have attached my resume for your reference and would appreciate it if you could inform me of the next steps in the application process.
Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Sir or Madam,
I came across your job posting on the Internet and I am writing to express my interest in applying for the position. I believe that I would be a suitable candidate for the role of summer custodian, as I possess a genuine passion for amusement parks, have the availability during the summer due to my school break, and maintain a positive and enthusiastic demeanor. The job at hand appears to be of manageable nature, therefore, I am confident in my ability to excel in this position. Additionally, I aspire to save up funds for a new gaming console, thus further motivating me to pursue this opportunity. Kindly inform me of when it would be convenient for us to discuss my potential employment further. Enclosed within this correspondence, you shall find a copy of my resume.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener
Dear Hiring Manager,
I recently came across the job listing on the Internet and I am writing to express my interest in the position of summer custodian. I believe I would be a valuable addition to your team due to my genuine passion for amusement parks, my availability during the summer months, and my enthusiastic and positive attitude. I am confident that I possess the necessary skills to excel in this role. Furthermore, I am motivated to earn income to contribute towards saving for a new game system. Please let me know when a convenient time would be to discuss further details. I have attached my resume for your reference.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Kurt Gardener