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"we have won but at great cost" Said Benbur
"True" said Hunaruan "many men lost their lives fighting for my kingdom your kingdom our kingdom"
"Yes" said Gribber "but now I can return home"
"But we still need you" said Lanceren "we must retake our city from the goblins"
"It will be my pleasure to smash those scum-bags" said Gribber
"We must return to Lafniap" said Hunaruan "but where is Nethstel"
"he fell in battle" said Pumperin "he's dead"
"What" cried Hunaruan "fallen how"
"He has not fallen" said Frumer "here he is"
Frumer walked forward carrying Nethstel on his back he put him down and called for Benbur.
"Benbur" he cried "come and heal him
Benbur walked up and with his gumental power healed him. Nethstel coughed and arose then he drew his sword.
" where are the redheads" he said as he looked around "have we won"
"Yes we have won" said Hunaruan "thanks to Gribber Steeltoe if it were not for him we would've lost"
"Hey" said Lanceren "What about me I went out there and helped het him"
Gribber looked at him and smiled.
"So you still haven't learned" said Gribber "after all that time you still haven't learned"
"I've learned some" said Lanceren " I've learned that I'm strong but your stronger"
"If your stronger than anything it might be an ant" said Gribber
"Ok we've already went over this" said Frumer.
"Yeah where's my brother" asked Lanceren "WHERE IS HE"
"He fell" said Pumperin.
"Oh you are the ultimate death man you know everyone who's died EVEN MY BROTHER"
"Redworn killed your brother I would've saved him but I could not"
said Pumperin.
Lanceren's eyes filled with tears as he remembered his brother's death. He turned his back to the group and walked away, unable to speak.
"We have won, but at a great cost," said Hunaruan, breaking the silence.
"Yes," said Benbur. "But let us honor the fallen and continue to fight for our kingdom."
The group nodded in agreement and set out to retake their city from the goblins, determined to keep their fallen comrades in mind as they fought.
Give corrected version
"we have won but at great cost" Said Benbur
"True" said Hunaruan "many men lost their lives fighting for my kingdom your kingdom our kingdom"
"Yes" said Gribber "but now I can return home"
"But we still need you" said Lanceren "we must retake our city from the goblins"
"It will be my pleasure to smash those scum-bags" said Gribber
"We must return to Lafniap" said Hunaruan "but where is Nethstel"
"he fell in battle" said Pumperin "he's dead"
"What" cried Hunaruan "fallen how"
"He has not fallen" said Frumer "here he is"
Frumer walked forward carrying Nethstel on his back he put him down and called for Benbur.
"Benbur" he cried "come and heal him
Benbur walked up and with his gumental power healed him. Nethstel coughed and arose then he drew his sword.
" where are the redheads" he said as he looked around "have we won"
"Yes we have won" said Hunaruan "thanks to Gribber Steeltoe if it were not for him we would've lost"
"Hey" said Lanceren "What about me I went out there and helped het him"
Gribber looked at him and smiled.
"So you still haven't learned" said Gribber "after all that time you still haven't learned"
"I've learned some" said Lanceren " I've learned that I'm strong but your stronger"
"If your stronger than anything it might be an ant" said Gribber
"Ok we've already went over this" said Frumer.
"Yeah where's my brother" asked Lanceren "WHERE IS HE"
"He fell" said Pumperin.
"Oh you are the ultimate death man you know everyone who's died EVEN MY BROTHER"
"Redworn killed your brother I would've saved him but I could not"
said Pumperin.
Lanceren's eyes filled with tears as he remembered his brother's death. He turned his back to the group and walked away, unable to speak.
"We have won, but at a great cost," said Benbur, breaking the silence.
"Yes," said Hunaruan. "Many men lost their lives fighting for our kingdom."
"But we cannot let their sacrifice be in vain," said Gribber. "We must retake our city from the goblins and defend our land."
"Agreed," said Frumer. "And Nethstel's return gives us hope. He is a strong warrior and a valuable ally."
Nethstel nodded in agreement and looked around at his companions.
"Let's honor the fallen by fighting for what they believed in," he said.
The group nodded in unison and set out to reclaim their city, determined to honor the memory of those who had given their lives for their kingdom.
"we have won, but at great cost," said Benbur.
"True," said Hunaruan, "many men lost their lives fighting for my kingdom, your kingdom, our kingdom."
"Yes," said Gribber, "but now I can return home."
"But we still need you," said Lanceren, "we must retake our city from the goblins."
"It will be my pleasure to smash those scum-bags," said Gribber.
"We must return to Lafniap," said Hunaruan, "but where is Nethstel?"
"He fell in battle," said Pumperin, "he's dead."
"What?" cried Hunaruan, "fallen? How?"
"He has not fallen," said Frumer, "here he is."
Frumer walked forward, carrying Nethstel on his back. He put him down and called for Benbur.
"Benbur," he cried, "come and heal him."
To fix the errors in the dialogue, I would make the following revisions:
Benbur walked up and used his healing power to restore him. Nethstel coughed and got up, drawing his sword.
"Where are the reinforcements?" he said as he looked around. "Have we won?"
"Yes, we have won," said Hunaruan, "thanks to Gribber Steeltoe. If it were not for him, we would have lost."
"Hey," said Lanceren, "what about me? I went out there and helped him."
Gribber looked at him and smiled.
"So, you still haven't learned," said Gribber. "After all that time, you still haven't learned."
"I've learned some," said Lanceren. "I've learned that I'm strong, but you're stronger."
"If you're stronger than anything, it might be an ant," said Gribber.
"Alright, we've already gone over this," said Frumer.
"Yeah, where's my brother?" asked Lanceren. "WHERE IS HE?"
"He fell," said Pumperin.
"Oh, you are the ultimate bringer of death. You know everyone who's died, EVEN MY BROTHER."
"Redworn killed your brother. I would have saved him, but I could not."