Daniel has compiled this information for an essay on the topic of too much screen time:
Too much screen time can interfere with sleep.
The blue light emitted by screens interferes with sleep hormones.
Many teens are experiencing difficulty falling and staying asleep.
Too much screen time can become addictive.
Many games and videos are exciting and release a pleasure hormone that ends when screen time ends.
A study showed that many teens became irritable when screen time ended.
In 3–5 sentences, write a concluding paragraph for the essay. Be sure to include all of the necessary parts of a conclusion.
After reading the information Daniel has compiled for his essay, we can write the following as an example of a conclusion for his text:
In conclusion, excessive screen time is related to health issues such as insomnia and addictive behavior. Therefore, parents should do their best to teach their children about the risks of too much screen time. They should also try to control how much time their kids spend playing video games so that their children will live healthier lives.
Introduce your conclusion with a transition word or phrase that shows you are now ending your essay. Examples: therefore, thus, in conclusion, in summary, etc.
The conclusion must not add new ideas or evidence to the text. It must simply restate what was already said before.
Thus, using fewer words, repeat what your claim is and why you think that way.
In Daniel's case, we can assume from the information that he compiled that he will not defend screen time. He will most likely warn readers about its dangers and urge parents to take action.
His conclusion should, therefore, summarize what the dangers of excessive screen time are and what parents should do to help their children. Hope this helps u! Soo sorry if im wrong. plz tell me if i am. :( ♥Bye!♥
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