One day after dropping off Purple at school, he calls his Brother Mark to pick up Purple later because he is going to be late coming back home, Mark agrees to pick her up later, Max then hangs up the phone and heads to work, after work, he starts to head home, but he gets lost, it starts to rain then he blacks out, he wakes up in a room, Max looks up to see someone standing there looking at him, he stares back at the person, Max can’t see the persons face, he then asks “who are you?”, the person doesn’t respond, the person just turns around and leaves, Max looks around the room, he then stands up, he sees the door that the person walked out of and a vent, he walks to the door, there is a small window, he doesn’t see anyone, he then tries to open the door, but he can’t, he looks around once more, he says to himself “Maybe I’ll try the vent” he walks to the vent and gets on his knees and tries to pull the cover off the vent, it doesn’t come off, he tries again, it comes off and he puts it on the ground right next to him, he goes into the vent and comes out on the other side of the vent and he slowly stands up, he looks around, “Where am I” he says to himself, Max then hears footsteps, he looks around again, he sees the door leading to the room he was in, runs to the other door in front of him, he opens the door and goes in and closes it behind him, he hears as the person walks pass the room he is in,“You want me to bring him now?” the person says to his phone, the person on the phone: “Yes”, “Okay” The person says as they hang up the phone, and turns to the door that Max was in, he hears silence for 2 seconds then the door opens, Max hears the footsteps walk into the room, and disappear, Max looks around the room that he is in, he is in a small closet with a few jackets and shoes, he sits on the floor and thinks to himself “How do I get out of here”, he hears the footsteps again but this time it comes closer then it stops, Max moves back a bit from the door, as he looks up at the door, he hears the footsteps again, but they walk back the same way they came from originally, Max slowly stands up and opens the door, he walks out of the room trying not to make less noise as possible, but then he almost trips coming out of the closet, he catches himself, he looks up to see another door about 3 feet from the door that Max just came out of, he walks to the door the door is gray with a small window with diamond shapes on it, Max looks though the window, its looks like a forest or some sort, he starts to put his hand up to open the door, he stops, he looks at the door “It won’t be easy will it” Max says to himself, he turns around and slowly walks to the end of the corner, Max looks around, he doesn’t see the person, so he continues to walk, to see six more doors as he turns the corner, Max stops at the first door, he listens to hear footsteps before opening the door, Max opens the door to see a kitchen, he closes the door behind him as he walks in, he walks to the counter, he see’s a wrench, he picks it up, Max then hears the footsteps again, Max runs to the other side of the counter and ducking behind it to hear the door open and the person walks inside, Max leans against the counter, putting both his hands on the floor, with the wrench resting in his lap, he hears as the person walk around, when Max thought the person was leaving, he hears the persons footsteps coming from the right of the counter, Max starting to feel scared, the person then says “Don’t be afraid, come out” Max picks up the wrench and gets on his knees, putting the wrench in his mouth as he trys to move to the right of the counter, he manges to get under the circle table with out the person seeing him, Max watches as the person was walks out the other side, the person is turned towards the door, when the person was about to get closer to the door, just then the wrench falls to the ground making a metallic sound, Max looks at the wrench laying on the ground, as he hears the person turn to walk towards the table, he looks up to see the person move the table, he is frozen in fear, the person then says “Their you are” as the person grabs Max by the shirt and knocks him out, the person drops him and Max hits the floor with a Thump, he wakes up back in the room, he looks around to see the vent is blocked off now, Max feels a bit of pain, he rubs the bottom of his nose with his arm, he looks at his arm to see a bit of blood, he rubs his arm on his shirt as he stands up,(maybe because of what it originally said) but it hurts, he looks to see the person enter, “What do you want” Max says,”Someone wants to see you” says the person

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One day after dropping off Purple at school, he calls his Brother Mark to pick up Purple later because he is going to be late coming back home, Mark agrees to pick her up later, Max then hangs up the phone and heads to work, after work, he starts to head home, but he gets lost, it starts to rain then he blacks out, he wakes up in a room, Max looks up to see someone standing there looking at him, he stares back at the person, Max can’t see the persons face, he then asks “who are you?”, the person doesn’t respond, the person just turns around and leaves, Max looks around the room, he then stands up, he sees the door that the person walked out of and a vent, he walks to the door, there is a small window, he doesn’t see anyone, he then tries to open the door, but he can’t, he looks around once more, he says to himself “Maybe I’ll try the vent” he walks to the vent and gets on his knees and tries to pull the cover off the vent, it doesn’t come off, he tries again, it comes off and he puts it on the ground right next to him, he goes into the vent and comes out on the other side of the vent and he slowly stands up, he looks around, “Where am I” he says to himself, Max then hears footsteps, he looks around again, he sees the door leading to the room he was in, runs to the other door in front of him, he opens the door and goes in and closes it behind him, he hears as the person walks pass the room he is in,“You want me to bring him now?” the person says to his phone, the person on the phone: “Yes”, “Okay” The person says as they hang up the phone, and turns to the door that Max was in, he hears silence for 2 seconds then the door opens, Max hears the footsteps walk into the room, and disappear, Max looks around the room that he is in, he is in a small closet with a few jackets and shoes, he sits on the floor and thinks to himself “How do I get out of here”, he hears the footsteps again but this time it comes closer then it stops, Max moves back a bit from the door, as he looks up at the door, he hears the footsteps again, but they walk back the same way they came from originally, Max slowly stands up and opens the door, he walks out of the room trying not to make less noise as possible, but then he almost trips coming out of the closet, he catches himself, he looks up to see another door about 3 feet from the door that Max just came out of, he walks to the door the door is gray with a small window with diamond shapes on it, Max looks though the window, its looks like a forest or some sort, he starts to put his hand up to open the door, he stops, he looks at the door “It won’t be easy will it” Max says to himself, he turns around and slowly walks to the end of the corner, Max looks around, he doesn’t see the person, so he continues to walk, to see six more doors as he turns the corner, Max stops at the first door, he listens to hear footsteps before opening the door, Max opens the door to see a kitchen, he closes the door behind him as he walks in, he walks to the counter, he see’s a wrench, he picks it up, Max then hears the footsteps again, Max runs to the other side of the counter and ducking behind it to hear the door open and the person walks inside, Max leans against the counter, putting both his hands on the floor, with the wrench resting in his lap, he hears as the person walk around, when Max thought the person was leaving, he hears the persons footsteps coming from the right of the counter, Max starting to feel scared, the person then says “Don’t be afraid, come out” Max picks up the wrench and gets on his knees, putting the wrench in his mouth as he trys to move to the right of the counter, he manges to get under the circle table with out the person seeing him, Max watches as the person was walks out the other side, the person is turned towards the door, when the person was about to get closer to the door, just then the wrench falls to the ground making a metallic sound, Max looks at the wrench laying on the ground, as he hears the person turn to walk towards the table, he looks up to see the person move the table, he is frozen in fear, the person then says “Their you are” as the person grabs Max by the shirt and knocks him out, the person drops him and Max hits the floor with a Thump, he wakes up back in the room, he looks around to see the vent is blocked off now, Max feels a bit of pain, he rubs the bottom of his nose with his arm, he looks at his arm to see a bit of blood, he rubs his arm on his shirt as he stands up,(maybe because of what it originally said) but it hurts, he looks to see the person enter, “What do you want” Max says,”Someone wants to see you” says the person

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That was a tense and suspenseful story! It kept me on edge, wondering what would happen next to Max. The sense of fear and uncertainty was portrayed well, and I was intrigued by the mysterious person and their intentions. Overall, I think it was a gripping and well-written narrative.