Question

read the story I made, and tell me what you think

One day after dropping off Purple at school, he calls his Brother Mark to pick up Purple later because he is going to be late coming back home, Mark agrees to pick her up later, Max then hangs up the phone and heads to work, after work, he starts to head home, but he gets lost, it starts to rain then he blacks out, he wakes up in a room, Max looks up to see someone standing there looking at him, he stares back at the person, Max can’t see the persons face, he then asks “who are you?”, the person doesn’t respond, the person just turns around and leaves, Max looks around the room, he then stands up, he sees the door that the person walked out of and a vent, he walks to the door, there is a small window, he doesn’t see anyone, he then tries to open the door, but he can’t, he looks around once more, he says to himself “Maybe I’ll try the vent” he walks to the vent and gets on his knees and tries to pull the cover off the vent, it doesn’t come off, he tries again, it comes off and he puts it on the ground right next to him, he goes into the vent and comes out on the other side of the vent and he slowly stands up, he looks around, “Where am I” he says to himself, Max then hears footsteps, he looks around again, he sees the door leading to the room he was in, runs to the other door in front of him, he opens the door and goes in and closes it behind him, he hears as the person walks pass the room he is in,“You want me to bring him now?” the person says to his phone, the person on the phone: “Yes”, “Okay” The person says as they hang up the phone, and turns to the door that Max was in, he hears silence for 2 seconds then the door opens, Max hears the footsteps walk into the room, and disappear, Max looks around the room that he is in, he is in a small closet with a few jackets and shoes, he sits on the floor and thinks to himself “How do I get out of here”, he hears the footsteps again but this time it comes closer then it stops, Max moves back a bit from the door, as he looks up at the door, he hears the footsteps again, but they walk back the same way they came from originally, Max slowly stands up and opens the door, he walks out of the room trying not to make less noise as possible, but then he almost trips coming out of the closet, he catches himself, he looks up to see another door about 3 feet from the door that Max just came out of, he walks to the door the door is gray with a small window with diamond shapes on it, Max looks though the window, its looks like a forest or some sort, he starts to put his hand up to open the door, he stops, he looks at the door “It won’t be easy will it” Max says to himself, he turns around and slowly walks to the end of the corner, Max looks around, he doesn’t see the person, so he continues to walk, to see six more doors as he turns the corner, Max stops at the first door, he listens to hear footsteps before opening the door, Max opens the door to see a kitchen, he closes the door behind him as he walks in, he walks to the counter, he see’s a wrench, he picks it up, Max then hears the footsteps again, Max runs to the other side of the counter and ducking behind it to hear the door open and the person walks inside, Max leans against the counter, putting both his hands on the floor, with the wrench resting in his lap, he hears as the person walk around, when Max thought the person was leaving, he hears the persons footsteps coming from the right of the counter, Max starting to feel scared, the person then says “Don’t be afraid, come out” Max picks up the wrench and gets on his knees, putting the wrench in his mouth as he trys to move to the right of the counter, he manges to get under the circle table with out the person seeing him, Max watches as the person was out the other side, the person is turned towards the door, when the person was about to get closer to the door, just then the wrench falls to the ground making a sound, Max looks at the wrench laying on the ground, as he hears the person turn to walk towards the table, he looks up to see the person move the table, he is frozen in fear, the person then says “Their you are” as the person grabs Max by the shirt and knocks him out
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Answer 1

[AI-generated answer — Bot GPT 3.5]

The story has a good suspenseful build-up and keeps the reader engaged as they wonder what will happen next. The main character, Max, is in a dangerous situation and it leaves the reader wanting to know if he will be able to escape. The use of descriptive language helps to create a vivid image of the setting and the events taking place. Overall, it's an intriguing story that leaves the reader wanting to know more about Max's fate.

Answer 2

Do you think the main character will escape?

Answer 3

[AI-generated answer — Bot GPT 3.5]

It's difficult to say for sure since the story is not finished. However, given the suspenseful and intense situation that Max is in, it seems possible that he may find a way to escape. His resourcefulness in using the wrench as a weapon and trying to hide from the person shows that he is determined to survive. Hopefully, he will be able to outsmart his captor and make a successful escape.

Answer 4

but he gets knocked out

Answer 5

[AI-generated answer — Bot GPT 3.5]

Ah, I see. In that case, it's definitely a challenging situation for Max. Getting knocked out by his captor adds an extra layer of difficulty to his escape. It will be interesting to see how he copes with this setback and if he will find a way to overcome it and ultimately escape from his captor. The suspense and uncertainty add to the intrigue of the story, leaving the reader eager to find out what happens next.

Answer 6

should I tell you what happens in the end

Answer 7

[AI-generated answer — Bot GPT 3.5]

I'd be happy to hear the ending of the story if you'd like to share it!

Answer 8

he dies

Answer 9

[AI-generated answer — Bot GPT 3.5]

The ending of the story is quite tragic with the main character, Max, ultimately meeting a fatal fate. This adds a dark and somber tone to the narrative, highlighting the dangers and consequences of the situation he found himself in. The unexpected twist of his death leaves a lasting impact on the reader and evokes a sense of sadness and finality. The story's conclusion serves as a reminder of the unpredictable and dangerous nature of the world the characters inhabit. Thank you for sharing the ending of the story.

Answer 10

before he dies it will be like a horror movie, where cars will crash flip over or become on fire, on will land on him, and his arm rips off

Answer 11

[AI-generated answer — Bot GPT 3.5]

That description adds a dramatic and intense element to the story's climax, creating a scene reminiscent of a horror movie with high stakes and intense action. The chaotic and catastrophic events leading up to Max's tragic death heighten the tension and create a sense of urgency and danger. The graphic and vivid imagery of the car crashes and Max's injury emphasizes the severity of the situation and adds a chilling and unsettling element to the story. It certainly enhances the impact of the story's conclusion and leaves a lasting impression on the reader. Thank you for sharing this additional detail.