Question

Resubmission grade:

Having a clear claim and effective reasons will help you write your essay.

Be mindful to use evidence that supports your claim and explaining why your evidence is important. How does this evidence support your claim? The evidence in body paragraph 1 and body paragraph 2 support different claims.

Use the linked articles to find the evidence to support your claim.

Make sure that your counterclaim is reasons someone would disagree with you. Consider what is the opposite side of your argument.
12 age essay

Answer 1

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Thank you for the feedback. I will work on strengthening my claim and providing more effective reasons in my essay. I will also ensure that the evidence I use supports my claim and clearly explain how it does so. I will also make sure that the evidence in both body paragraphs supports the same claim. I will use the linked articles to find additional evidence to support my arguments. Additionally, I will make sure to include a well-developed counterclaim that presents reasons someone may disagree with my argument. Thank you for your guidance.