Question

please fix the below as a barrister would write in an affirmation for the hong Kong family court moving and relocation application for children

43. Sadly, when considering the Mother´s own documented actions of neglect and leaving Philip alone and locked out in the middle of the night, exposed to random strangers from online dating sites at home and in taxis late at night, and the other material improper conducts cannot be wilfully ignored, and more of the same can be discussed and disclosed but will not solve this problem, but needs to be considered IF Philip is to be left alone in Hong Kong with just the Mother.
A. For the HK Family Court’s record just on Monday, April 22, 2024. The Mother made the below comments directly to her own children, which should be enough to grant this application to protect both children from further HARM:
B. The Mother confirmed again that “Leonidas and Father going to the USA” but requires payment. The Mother refers to her son Leonidas as ‘FINANCIAL LEVERAGE’ and no child should be told by their own parent that they are just FINANCIAL LEVERAGE’
C. The Mother clearly views Philip as a younger longer lasting ‘FINANCIAL LEVARAGE’ acknowledges that the USA is better for both children’s best interests and well being. Sadly, the Mother is MORE concerned about herself and her personal well being and wants to SEPARATE the siblings for her own personal self interests to remain in Hong Kong. This causing real SERIOUS HARM to Philip for perceived personal self interest and wrongly SEPARATES Philip from both his brother Leonidas and Father virtually permanently would be devastating to Philip being left completely alone with the Mother to live in financial distress in unaffordable Hong Kong with no quality schooling would be an act to cause the child Philip WILLFUL HARM.
D. The Father’s proposal includes the Mother in the USA, provides stable quality housing, private schooling, does not separate the close in age siblings, and is clearly in the best interest and well being for both children including the Mother.
44. The matter at hand for the HK Family Court is the serious consideration of leaving Philip alone in Hong Kong with just the Mother should be a grave concern especially in light of the far better, more stable, and high quality of living alternatives available in the US.
A. My preference will be to avoid any negative arguments of prior improper conducts, delve into a deeper analysis of WHY leaving Philip or any child alone with the Mother in Hong Kong is clearly not either of the older children’s best interests, well-being, or safety for both the children and the Mother alike.
B. My hope is to look forward, and focus and concentrate on the ‘BRIGHT FUTURES’ both children have available to them in the United States of America verses discussing and analysing the very dark realities of living in Hong Kong under these conditions alone with just the Mother under such financial duress and hardship, and this stress only leading to more unfortunate incidents which could only get worse under these circumstances. Please refer to the Vary Philip’s Schooling Affirmation and Exhibits and Vary Philip’s Interim Care and Control Affirmation and Exhibits, which speak for themselves.
45. My hope is the Mother herself by way of mutual consent agrees to these URGENT applications to remove both children and enjoy secured benefit of permanent housing, a car, car insurance, and maintenance available in the United States of America.

Answer 1

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In the affirmation for the Hong Kong Family Court moving and relocation application for children, the following revisions could be made:

43. Regrettably, the Mother's documented actions of neglect, including leaving Philip alone and locked out at night, exposing him to strangers from online dating sites, and other improper conduct cannot be disregarded. Further discussions and disclosures of similar behavior may exacerbate the situation if Philip is left alone in Hong Kong with only the Mother.

A. On Monday, April 22, 2024, the Mother made troubling statements directly to her children, which emphasize the need for this application to protect the children from harm.

B. The Mother referred to her son, Leonidas, as "financial leverage" and insinuated that his father's assistance to relocate to the USA was contingent on payment. No child should be subjected to such degrading language by their own parent.

C. Additionally, the Mother views Philip as a long-term financial asset and acknowledges that the USA would be in the best interests of both children. However, her personal interests and desire to remain in Hong Kong for financial gain are prioritized over the well-being of her children. This plan to separate the siblings and leave Philip alone with the Mother in Hong Kong, in financial distress and without quality schooling, is clearly harmful to the child and serves the Mother's selfish motives.

D. The Father's proposal includes provisions for the Mother in the USA, stable housing, private schooling for the children, and the maintenance of close sibling relationships. This plan is clearly in the best interests of all parties involved.

44. The primary concern for the Hong Kong Family Court is the serious implications of leaving Philip alone with the Mother in Hong Kong when better, more stable living arrangements are available in the US.

A. Rather than focusing on past misconduct, it is essential to analyze why leaving Philip in Hong Kong with the Mother is not in his or his sibling's best interests or safety.

B. It is imperative to shift focus towards the promising opportunities for both children in the USA, rather than dwelling on the challenges of living in Hong Kong under current circumstances. Please refer to the Vary Philip’s Schooling Affirmation and Exhibits and Vary Philip’s Interim Care and Control Affirmation and Exhibits for further details.

45. It is hoped that the Mother will agree to these urgent applications for the removal of both children to the USA, where they can benefit from permanent housing, a car, car insurance, and maintenance provisions.