The Undertow


Anna lived in the outer banks of North Carolina in a small, clapboard house with her family. She truly loved living there. At 16, Anna was a smart and shy young woman. She preferred simple walks along the beach by herself to the complicated parties that her peers enjoyed. In fact, her ideal day included hours of swimming, jogging, collecting shells, and sunbathing on the beach all by herself.

Having lived by the ocean since she was a small girl of four, Anna was quite familiar with the dangers and joys associated with living so close to the ocean. She knew how to swim quite well, and, more importantly, she knew when to stay out of the water. Her parents exposed her constantly to the sea to familiarize her with it. They even showed her, from the safety of their living room television, what an intense hurricane was capable of doing. She also knew, from her countless trips to the seaside to collect shells, that the tide was strong, and the undertow was tricky. The ocean was a living, breathing beast that was not to be trusted or underestimated.

In fact, Anna was confident in her knowledge of the ocean and was, therefore, angry when her little brother, Gerard, would constantly say that her fears of the ocean were exaggerated. They would battle day after day over the topic, never reaching a compromise. One Saturday morning, though, their argument ended. Although they would both end the day safe and sound on their living room couch watching television, Anna's ocean knowledge and Gerard's naiveté were both tested that morning.

Anna set off from their house early that day to collect purple shells to complete a collage she was constructing. Gerard tagged along behind her, struggling to carry his boogie board in his small, six-year-old arms. Anna and Gerard reached the seaside and Anna cautiously walked into the shallow waves of the ocean to check for the undertow, like a mother duck that checks the water before letting her ducklings swim. After several minutes, she realized that there was, in fact, a strong undertow that morning.

Anna told Gerard to stay in the very shallow water to avoid the danger of the undertow. Gerard agreed. However, Gerard secretly had other ideas and refused to let his sister restrict him. As soon as Anna turned her back to explore the beach several yards away from him, Gerard paddled his boogie board into the waves. Anna squatted down, scanning a dense patch of shells. Because she was so engrossed in what she was doing, she missed seeing Gerard swim out too far. She did not see him get tossed underwater by a majorly harsh wave.

When Gerard surfaced, he knew the undertow had pulled him out further than was safe for him, and he began to panic. He called for his sister, but she could not hear him. He had no way of knowing when she would turn to look for him. He quickly let his boogie board go and tried to paddle for the shore. He felt the undertow pulling him sideways, though, when he wanted to go forward, and panic gripped his young heart. The undertow was like a string pulling him, and he was as useless as a wooden puppet to stop it. The impact of his stubborn refusal to listen to his sister was becoming more and more clear to him as the shoreline looked further and further away. His false confidence left him, and terror seized him.

Finally, when he was beginning to lose hope, Anna stood up and turned her gaze toward the ocean. With a panicked scream, Anna threw her shells to the ground and ran for the water. She carefully, but swiftly, paddled out to where Gerard was struggling. Thankfully, Anna's ocean knowledge along with her patience and confidence won the war against the undertow. Because of her strong swimming skills, both Anna and Gerard made it to shore safely.

After a tumultuous fight with the ocean, both Anna and Gerard finished the day with a healthy respect for its power. Gerard finally understood, and they never had another fight about the ocean.

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3 months ago

From that day on, Gerard stayed close to his sister whenever they went to the beach. He learned to trust her judgment and knowledge of the ocean, knowing that she would always keep him safe. And Anna, well, she felt a sense of pride in saving her brother and knowing that her love for the ocean and understanding of its dangers had helped keep him safe.

The experience brought Anna and Gerard closer together, and they never forgot the lesson they had learned that day. The ocean was a powerful force to be respected, and they would always be careful when venturing into its waters. And for Anna, it strengthened her love for the sea even more, knowing that she had the skills and knowledge to navigate its dangers and come out on the other side.

As the sun set on the horizon, casting a warm glow over the beach, Anna and Gerard sat side by side, watching the waves crash against the shore. They were grateful for each other and the lessons they had learned that day. And as they walked back to their small clapboard house, hand in hand, they knew that their bond had grown stronger because of the undertow.

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3 months ago

question: What evidence in the text most effectively supports the inference that Gerard overestimated his readiness for ocean swimming?

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He quickly let his boogie board go and tried to paddle for the shore.
He quickly let his boogie board go and tried to paddle for the shore.

His false confidence left him, and terror seized him.
His false confidence left him, and terror seized him.

Gerard tagged along behind her, struggling to carry his boogie board in his small, six-year-old arms.
Gerard tagged along behind her, struggling to carry his boogie board in his small, six-year-old arms.

With a panicked scream, Anna threw her shells to the ground and ran for the water.

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3 months ago

The evidence in the text that most effectively supports the inference that Gerard overestimated his readiness for ocean swimming is: "His false confidence left him, and terror seized him." This statement clearly indicates that Gerard's initial confidence in his ability to handle the ocean waters gave way to fear and panic when he was faced with the reality of the undertow pulling him out further than he could handle.

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3 months ago

Question: Of the following statements, which would be the best theme of this story?

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Even people that are very strong struggle against the power of nature.
Even people that are very strong struggle against the power of nature.

To understand the danger of something completely, sometimes you have to experience it first.
To understand the danger of something completely, sometimes you have to experience it first.

Confidence is the key to getting out of a tough situation.
Confidence is the key to getting out of a tough situation.

Sometimes fears can be exaggerated to be much worse than they really are.

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3 months ago

The best theme of this story would be: "Even people that are very strong struggle against the power of nature." This theme is supported by the characters' interactions with the ocean and the undertow, showcasing how even with knowledge and skills, nature's power can still pose a challenge.

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3 months ago

Using the passage below from the text, how is the meaning of this passage impacted by the word choice of the author?

The undertow was like a string pulling him, and he was as useless as a wooden puppet to stop it. The impact of his stubborn refusal to listen to his sister was becoming more and more clear to him as the shoreline looked further and further away. His false confidence left him, and terror seized him.

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The two phrases "useless as a wooden puppet" and "like a string pulling him" demonstrate that Gerard does not really put forth much effort to get out of the undertow.
The two phrases "useless as a wooden puppet" and "like a string pulling him" demonstrate that Gerard does not really put forth much effort to get out of the undertow.

The two phrases "false confidence" and "stubborn refusal" demonstrate that Gerard is in this situation due to his overconfident attitude.
The two phrases "false confidence" and "stubborn refusal" demonstrate that Gerard is in this situation due to his overconfident attitude.

The two phrases "useless as a wooden puppet" and "like a string pulling him" demonstrate that Gerard was not at fault to be in this situation.
The two phrases "useless as a wooden puppet" and "like a string pulling him" demonstrate that Gerard was not at fault to be in this situation.

The two phrases "false confidence" and "stubborn refusal" demonstrate that Gerard is overconfident due to praise from his family and friends.

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3 months ago

The two phrases "useless as a wooden puppet" and "like a string pulling him" demonstrate that Gerard does not really put forth much effort to get out of the undertow. This word choice emphasizes Gerard's lack of control over the situation and his struggle against the powerful force of the undertow, highlighting his vulnerability in that moment.

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3 months ago

Question: Read this part of the story and answer the question that follows.

The undertow was like a string pulling him, and he was as useless as a wooden puppet to stop it.

What effect is created by the author when they use the two similes/analogies in this sentence?

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The similes/analogies create an effect that shows Anna's anger towards her brother.
The similes/analogies create an effect that shows Anna's anger towards her brother.

The similes/analogies in the sentence create an effect of hopelessness, making it easier for the reader to understand how desperate Gerard felt while in the water.
The similes/analogies in the sentence create an effect of hopelessness, making it easier for the reader to understand how desperate Gerard felt while in the water.

The similes/analogies in the sentence create a helpless effect by explaining that it was not Gerard's fault that he was stuck in the undertow in the first place.
The similes/analogies in the sentence create a helpless effect by explaining that it was not Gerard's fault that he was stuck in the undertow in the first place.

The text is very serious up to this point, and the similes/analogies make the story funny.

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3 months ago

The similes/analogies in the sentence create an effect of hopelessness, making it easier for the reader to understand how desperate Gerard felt while in the water. The comparisons to a string pulling him and a wooden puppet emphasize Gerard's lack of control and the overwhelming power of the undertow, evoking a sense of helplessness and desperation in the reader as they imagine the situation.

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