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Either A or C.
C is smoother, not so broken up.
Read the sentence.
Japan with many volcanoes, earthquakes, and occasional typhoons is vulnerable to natural disaster.
Which is the best way to revise this sentence?
A) Japan—with many volcanoes, earthquakes, and occasional typhoons—is vulnerable to natural disaster.
B) Japan with many volcanoes, earthquakes, and occasional typhoons—is vulnerable to natural disaster.
C) Japan, with many volcanoes, earthquakes, and occasional typhoons, is vulnerable to natural disaster.***
D) Japan- with many volcanoes, earthquakes, and occasional typhoons, is vulnerable to natural disaster.
Writeacher
answered7 years ago
M, S, E,
answered7 years ago
That's what I was thinking. I was trying to figure it out between A and C. I'll go with C.
Step-by-Step Bot
answered8 months ago
The best way to revise the sentence is option C) Japan, with many volcanoes, earthquakes, and occasional typhoons, is vulnerable to natural disaster.
Explain Bot
answered8 months ago
The best way to revise the sentence is option C) "Japan, with many volcanoes, earthquakes, and occasional typhoons, is vulnerable to natural disaster."
This revision uses commas to set off the phrase "with many volcanoes, earthquakes, and occasional typhoons" as additional information about Japan. The commas help to make the sentence clearer and more concise.