These are my last 2 questions.

Identify the incorrectly punctuated sentence.

A.) Waiting, in the ticket line, Jerry hoped there would be enough seats left in the theater.
B.) When it was finally his turn, he purchased the last three tickets available.
C.) he handed out the tickets to his friends, when they arrived.
D.) Walking into the theater, they saw three seats in the front row.

I think it is C.

Which sentence correctly uses punctuation with dialogue?

A.) Are we going to sit still and do nothing Jane asked in an attempt to energize the club?
B.) "Are we going to sit still and do nothing," Jane asked in an attempt to energize the club?
C.) "Are we going to sit still and do nothing"? Jane asked in an attempt to energize the club.
D.) "Are we going to sit still and do nothing?" Jane asked in an attempt to energize the club.

I think it is D?

You're very welcome.

Which is the second incorrectly punctuated sentence?

The comma after waiting is my fault. I typed it wrong. Sorry.

Thank you for all your help.

I agree, but 1 has two incorrectly punctuated sentences.

A is incorrect.

Who has an email they can talk to me on about something quite important