Don’t you just wish you can have the time of your life without your parents? I know I wish I could. I would like to go out and hang out with my friends without parents such at parties with no chaperone.

First reason is I could have a better relationship with my friends. For example, me and my friends can learn more about their interests and other stuff they enjoy doing. We can do things best friends do and hang out at the mall or movies other than at school. I can spend a night at their house. Also, you can allow them to spend the night at my house.
Second reason is I could be more active and open to having more fun with my friends then at school. In addition, I can meet other people while also socializing with my friends. We can be best of friends. Also, we can learn the real way to being friends.
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Give Me Some Space
I know there are many concerns to me hanging out with my friends instead of my parents. It’s understandable I will have a curfew and have to abide by being on time. Another concern would be having transportation sometimes, because you (as my parents might be too tired to come out at night and come pick me up. Last concern would probably be; however, the thought of what I’m doing with my friends. I could have told you I was doing one thing and then doing another (something I wouldn’t do because I’m a dependable person).
In conclusion, I think I persuaded you to let me be free and still have fun with you (my parents and then my friends. You can know I will abide by your rules. There shouldn’t be any worries because I’m a mature teen. Also, some places I go you can come with my friend’s and their guardian. What do you think? Are you convinced?

Really!! Do I have to tell you how to correct this? me and my friends can learn

at their house - all your friends live in one house?

Please read this ALOUD to someone -- or better yet, ask someone else to read it ALOUD to you.

Then post your revised draft.

Give Me Some Space

Don’t you just wish you can have the time of your life without your parents? I know I wish I could. I would like to go out and hang out with my friends without parents such at parties with no chaperone.
First reason is I could have a better relationship with my friends. For example, me and my friends can learn more about their interests and other stuff they enjoy doing. We can do things best friends do and hang out at the mall or movies other than at school. I can spend a night at their house. Also, you can allow them to spend the night at my house.
Second reason is I could be more active and open to having more fun with my friends then at school. In addition, I can meet other people while also socializing with my friends. We can be best of friends. Also, we can learn the real way to being friends.
I know there are many concerns to me hanging out with my friends instead of my parents. It’s understandable I will have a curfew and have to abide by being on time. Another concern would be having transportation sometimes, because you (as my parents might be too tired to come out at night and come pick me up. Last concern would probably be; however, the thought of what I’m doing with my friends. I could have told you I was doing one thing and then doing another (something I wouldn’t do because I’m a dependable person).
In conclusion, I think I persuaded you to let me be free and still have fun with you (my parents and then my friends. You can know I will abide by your rules. There shouldn’t be any worries because I’m a mature teen. Also, some places I go you can come with my friend’s and their guardian. What do you think? Are you convinced?

Bruhhh a world without parents out be 😩🤌✨

I would live in Malaysia with my besties, or France with my “Mom”

Title: Give Me Some Space: A Persuasive Essay

Introduction:
In today's society, teenagers often desire the freedom to hang out with their friends without the constant presence of their parents. This essay aims to convince parents to allow their teenagers the opportunity to enjoy some independence and build stronger friendships. By exploring the benefits of such freedom, addressing concerns, and emphasizing maturity, it is my hope that parents will consider granting their teenagers more space.

Body:

1. Building Stronger Relationships:
The first reason why allowing me to hang out with friends without parents can be beneficial is that it promotes the development of stronger friendships. Exploring each other's interests and enjoying activities together outside of school allows me to connect on a deeper level with my friends. Whether it's hanging out at the mall or going to the movies, we can engage in activities that strengthen our bond and create lasting memories. Additionally, having the option to spend the night at their houses or inviting them to mine helps in cultivating these relationships further.

2. Experiencing Freedom and Fun:
The second reason why I seek more independence is the opportunity to be more active and experience greater enjoyment with my friends. By socializing without the constant presence of parents, we can learn more about ourselves, our interests, and how to navigate friendship dynamics independently. Encountering different people and socializing with others outside of school provides a chance to expand our social circles, potentially making new friends and broadening our perspectives.

Addressing Concerns:

While I acknowledge that concerns about granting such freedom exist, it's important to establish certain boundaries and address potential issues:

1. Curfew and Time Management: I understand the importance of being responsible and punctual. Agreeing on a reasonable curfew and demonstrating my ability to adhere to it will alleviate concerns about coming home late.

2. Transportation: Occasionally, the concern of transportation might arise, especially if my parents are unable to pick me up late at night. However, with effective communication, we can find alternative arrangements such as carpooling with friends' parents or using public transportation when necessary.

3. Trust and Honesty: One common concern is the possibility of dishonesty regarding my whereabouts. Rest assured, I understand the importance of trust and honesty. I would never compromise our bond by providing false information about my activities.

Conclusion:

After considering the benefits and addressing concerns, I hope that my persuasive essay has convinced you, my parents, to grant me some space and freedom to hang out with my friends. As a mature teen, I assure you that I will abide by the rules we establish, making responsible decisions while enjoying my newfound independence. Furthermore, where appropriate, we can even explore the option of you accompanying us, bringing your peace of mind. It is my hope that with your support, I can foster stronger friendships and personal growth through these social experiences.