I'm pleased you are helping us again!
I need you to revise a few sentences on my project since I varied them a little.
Thank you very much for helping me again!
1) I wonder if you could help us find a school which is willing to join our partnership with both a French and a German school.
2) The project will involve high achievers belonging to current second classes of high school (aged 17) and will mainly concentrate on biodiversity in water and other waterways in our local areas.
3) English has been chosen as lingua franca for the project.
This project has been thought of as a preparation for CLIL.
3) We are open (??) to consider other interesting proposals from your side.
Hi, Henry,
I've been on a trip, and will be traveling again later this week.
1) Could help us find a school that is willing to join our partnership with both a French and a German school?
2) The project will involve high achievers belonging to current second classes of high school (age 17 or so) and will mainly concentrate on biodiversity in water and other waterways in our local areas.
"water and other waterways" seems redundant. Exactly what do you mean by "water" and how is it different from "other waterways"?
3) English has been chosen as lingua franca for the project.
This project has been thought of as a preparation for CLIL.
Does everyone know what CLIL stands for?
3) We are open to other interesting proposals from your school.
1) Could you help us find a school that is willing to join our partnership with both a French and a German school?
1) Could you assist us in finding a school that is interested in joining our partnership with both a French and a German school?
To find such a school, you could try reaching out to your local education authorities or international school networks. You can also use online platforms that connect schools for partnership opportunities. Make sure to clearly state your requirements and goals for the partnership in your search.
2) The project will involve high-achieving students currently in their second year of high school (approximately aged 17), focusing mainly on biodiversity in local water bodies and other waterways.
To revise this sentence, you could make it more concise:
"The project will engage high-achieving second-year high school students (aged 17), focusing on local water bodies and biodiversity."
3) We have chosen English as the lingua franca for the project, as it is a planned preparation for Content and Language Integrated Learning (CLIL).
To revise this sentence, you could rephrase it as:
"We have selected English as the project's lingua franca, as it serves as a preparatory step for Content and Language Integrated Learning (CLIL)."
4) We are open to considering other intriguing proposals from your end.
This sentence seems to be straightforward. However, if you're looking to make it more formal, you could rephrase it as:
"We are open to considering any other compelling proposals from your side."
Remember, revising sentences is subjective, and the suggested revisions aim to enhance clarity and conciseness. Feel free to modify them further based on your preference and project requirements.