The propmt is Write a story about a time that I did something that caused me to feel pride in myself. What is this action and why did it make me feel pride in myself. I need help writing a story into this and you proofread and revise my grammaticly mistakes.

Have you ever wanted to be happy for yourself? Well, I have. The time I had pride in myself was when I tried to make an A in the hardest teacher class, Mrs. Mangum.

There are many reasons this make me feel pride in myself. One reason is that I tried very hard on the assignment and vocabulary/ English quizzes, but never made an A. Another reason is high school students that have or had her class are telling me nobody ever passes her class she’s hard a she’s tough, didn’t make it seem any better. Last reason is finally the day that arrived became my day because I earned ten bonus points that I remembered doing for her English class, therefore that brought me up to an 96 A.

As you can see, I had pride in myself when I earned an A in the toughest teacher class. I know to try to study better because bonus points don’t come every nine weeks of school. I will just to have to put a lot of work ethic especially in her class. If you don’t believe me, that making an A in her class is hard, go ahead then.

possessive, "the hardest teacher class," = teacher's class

"passes her class she’s hard a she’s tough, " = run-on sentence = her class; she's hard and she's tough"

"Last thing" = The last thing...

"for her English class, therefore that brought " = another run-on sentence = her English class; therefore that...

"will just to have to put a lot" = will just have to put (drop the first "to")_

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can u help me change this into a story with characters and dialogue?

ms.sue and writeteacher can i get your opinion as well?

Have you ever wanted to be happy for yourself? Well, I have. The time I had pride in myself was when I tried to make an A in the hardest teacher class, Mrs. Mangum.

You could change the personal pronouns to a person's name. Instead of I, substitute Rebecca or some other name.

Dialogue -- Other students said, "Nobody ever passes her class."

Once upon a time, in the midst of my high school years, I found myself facing a daunting challenge that seemed insurmountable. This challenge came in the form of Mrs. Mangum's class - an English class renowned for its difficulty. Many students, both past and present, had warned me that nobody ever passes Mrs. Mangum's class. Hearing this only intensified my determination to succeed, as I yearned to feel pride in myself.

I embarked on this journey to prove myself capable of achieving an A in Mrs. Mangum's class. From the very beginning, I poured my heart and soul into every assignment, spending countless hours studying and preparing for vocabulary and English quizzes. However, despite my unwavering efforts, I had never managed to obtain an A in her class.

The more I delved into Mrs. Mangum's curriculum, the tougher it seemed. The stories of her strictness and uncompromising nature haunted my thoughts. Despite the doubts clouding my mind, I refused to be deterred. I knew that earning that elusive A would not only be a symbol of academic accomplishment, but also a reflection of perseverance, discipline, and commitment to success.

As the days turned into weeks, and the weeks into months, I continued to push myself. I attended after-school study sessions, sought help from tutors, and engaged in group discussions with my classmates. I embraced every opportunity to improve my understanding of the subject matter and enhance my writing skills.

And then, a glimmer of hope emerged on the horizon. One day, Mrs. Mangum announced bonus points for an extra credit assignment related to one of our recent readings. It was a chance for me to prove my dedication and earn that coveted A. I poured my heart and soul into the assignment, carefully crafting my response, and ensuring that every word conveyed my deep understanding of the topic.

The day of reckoning arrived. Tentatively, I received my graded assignment, my heart pounding with anticipation. As I saw the bright red ink adorning the top of my paper, I held my breath, waiting for the verdict. And there it was - a shining 96 A! My heart swelled with overwhelming pride. I had done it.

The feeling of accomplishment washed over me, as I knew the journey had been far from easy. That A represented not only my academic success but also my unwavering perseverance and determination in the face of adversity. I realized that in order to achieve greatness, one must be willing to put in the hours, embrace challenges, and never let others' doubts undermine their own capabilities.

With this newfound sense of pride, I pledged to myself to continue striving for excellence in all aspects of my life. Mrs. Mangum's class taught me valuable lessons beyond just English literature. It taught me the importance of hard work, the strength of resilience, and the rewards that come with facing challenges head-on.

So, to anyone doubting the difficulties of earning an A in Mrs. Mangum's class, I encourage you to take up the challenge. Though it may be tough, the sense of pride and accomplishment that awaits you will be more than worth it. Embrace the journey, persevere through the hardships, and let your determination guide you towards success.