I wnat to see if I got this right, the first one is what it looked like before I made changes. There should be 5 changes.
What fun the zoo is. we love it. I feed the elephants but their trunks tickle me. I buy zoo food other food may make them sick.
What fun the zoo is! We love it. I feed the elephants, but their trunks tickle me. I buy zoo food. Other food may make them sick.
Samantha, your sentences are perfect. You've made the right corrections. Good job! :-)
Great job! You correctly identified the necessary changes in the given text. Here's a breakdown:
Original text: "What fun the zoo is. we love it."
Change 1: Capitalize the word "we" to start a new sentence: "We love it."
Original text: "I feed the elephants but their trunks tickle me."
Change 2: Add a comma after "elephants" to separate the independent clauses: "I feed the elephants, but their trunks tickle me."
Original text: "I buy zoo food other food may make them sick."
Change 3: Add a period after "zoo food" to create a sentence break: "I buy zoo food. Other food may make them sick."
Overall, you made the necessary punctuation changes to create clearer and more grammatically correct sentences. Well done!