Now since I have corrected those errors, and change some stuff in the 2nd par. could u go back and check my whole paper for spelling, commons, semi colon, period, subjust verb agreement,and make sure that everything is correct. I would really appreciate it.

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Topic: What is your biggest regret in life?

My Biggest Regret

Everyone has had some regrets about something in life. Some of the regrets could have been about a relationship or another choice that he or she made. Sometimes we make decisions base on how we are feeling at the moment, and don't really take time to think about it. My biggest regret is not taking high school as seriously as I should have.

To begin with, people often just make decisions about things in their life, but they soon realized that they should not have made it. By them making that decision in their life; it caused them to have sleepless nights,and pain. I can testify to this because it has happened to me on more than one occassion. I have had regrets about some people that I have met in life because they have hurt me.They were people that I thought was my friends, but actually they was back-stabbing me.

Next, my biggest regret is not taking high school as seriously as I should have taken it. I would do my work and turn it in, but I wouldn't put a lot of effort into it. For instance, I remember one time I had to turn in some math problems. The teacher assigned us about fifty problems in our math book. I did all the problems, but I had my cousin to do the one's that I didn't understand. Although she did the problems; I should have let her explained the problems so that I would know how to work them out the next time. I also regret cheating myself because I realized that if I had put forth more effort then I probably wouldn't have as many problems in my life today.

In conclusion, we all have asked ourselves, "What was I thinking about?" Often the decisions we make can really hurt us farther down the road in our lives. My biggest regret is not taking advantage of high school as I should have. When I think of some of the things I did when I was younger, I truly wonder what I was thinking about, but these things must have happened so that I could learn from my mistakes and not repeat them.

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  1. Give us some time, Angel, Writeteacher is busy now. I have sent her a note. If she doesn't get back to you in a couple of hours, I will try. Grammar is not my forte. It looks so much improved since early afternoon, I am impressed. Hang on.

  2. ok thank u


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