How did Napoleon help to spread feelings of nationalism throughout Europe? Explain why you think nationalism is a positive or negative force, or both.

Napoleon helped to spread feelings of nationalism throughout Europe by initially using it to help him defeat the austrian empire from within, by this was the beginning of the spread of Nationalism . Nationalism would be a positive and a negative force because well the positive effect of it would give Patriotism and national pride. It would also give civic pride and, it would give a more cohesive society. Negative effects of this would be bigotry and intolerance, also facism, and many wars would begin to occur. As well as expolitation of the people by their leaders.

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You're right. This sentence is messed up.

Napoleon helped to spread feelings of nationalism throughout Europe by starting it to help him defeat the austrian empire first from within, this spread nationalism around .

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This is good, but it would be much better if you put it in your own words.

Napoleon helped to spread feelings of nationalism throughout Europe by starting it to help him defeat the austrian empire first from within, this spread nationalism around . Nationalism would be a positive and a negative force because well the positive effect of it would give Patriotism and national pride. It would also give public pride and, it would make the society more organized. Negative effects of this would cause bigotry and intolerance, as well as facism, and a lot of wars would begin to occur. Also abuse of the people by their leaders would begin to occur.

Is this better? If there are any sentences that don't make sense here, then please don't mind changint them around, thanks

The first sentence seems messed up to me.

Napoleon helped to spread feelings of nationalism throughout Europe by defeating the austrian empire. He used feelings of Nationalism to defeat this empire, and that's how these feelings began to spread. Nationalism would be a positive and a negative force because well the positive effect of it would give Patriotism and national pride. It would also give public pride and, it would make the society more organized. Negative effects of this would cause bigotry and intolerance, as well as facism, and a lot of wars would begin to occur. Also abuse of the people by their leaders would begin to occur.


Is this better?

yes i think this is much better

It sure helped for my assignment