My sister can not only irritate me to a great extent, but also make some of my biggest nightmares come true.

how's this for a thesis?

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  1. Smoother phrasing -

    My sister not only irritates me to a great extent, but she also makes some of my worst nightmares come true.

    (Nightmares have no size!)

  2. ok, thanks

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