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The first one should be "...be killed; therefore, we are shown..."
The others are fine.
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One comment on use of words. You don't have the entire sentence, so I can't make a judgement, however, I question the usage of the word "essentially" with evil. What does that mean? I think I would look for another word.
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The story introduces the question of whether people are essentially good or essentially evil; unfortunately, the childlike innocence of Scout is lost through involvement with the events in the town. Does that make better sense?
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Thanks very much for your help
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Being able to read the whole sentence helps understand what you're doing, yes.
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Thank you again
