Thesis Statement

Although, the first admendment protects freedom of speech in many ways, the boundaries are so complex.

Please Help is this a good thesis statement?

2 answers

I'd change the word "so" to "quite" -- the rest sounds fine.

This means that your entire paper will be devoted to proving there are complexities involving the first amendment beyond the literal wording, right?

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/thesis.htm
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http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
answered by Writeacher
April 2, 2009
You need to delete that comma after "Although"!
answered by Writeacher
April 2, 2009