Thesis Statement

Although, the first admendment protects freedom of speech in many ways, the boundaries are so complex.

Please Help is this a good thesis statement?

2 answers

  1. I'd change the word "so" to "quite" -- the rest sounds fine.

    This means that your entire paper will be devoted to proving there are complexities involving the first amendment beyond the literal wording, right?

  2. You need to delete that comma after "Although"!

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