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What strategies can you use to help you write in a grammatically correct way?
proofreading is a strategy that can help you write in a grammatically correct way. You can have someone else can proofread your work as well and let you know what corrections you should make.
All those instances of "you" need to be what, since this is about you?
Please read this aloud and fix errors and places that don't make sense.
Make sure there are no runons or fragments.