Annex Perspectives

Description
For this assignment, you will choose a resident of the annex (other than Anne) and rewrite a journal entry from this individual’s perspective.
Specifications
Your entry should
• Reflect what you have learned about the personality traits and viewpoints of the individual you select.
• Adopt this individual’s perspective, as though you were seeing the world through this individual’s eyes. This should include
1. Use of first-person pronouns (such as I, me, and my) to refer to this individual, not yourself.
2. A tone that realistically reflects how this individual would feel about the subject matter he or she writes about.
• You may select to rewrite one of the following entries:
1. Tuesday, July 13, 1943, or
2. Friday, October 29, 1943
• Once you have completed your entry, you should write an additional one-paragraph (6–8 sentences) response explaining how the tone of the entry has changed and why you chose to make these changes.

What is your question about this assignment? It is just putting yourself someone else's shoes.

Journal Entry: Tuesday, July 13, 1943 - Peter's Perspective

Oi, here we go again, another miserable day stuck in this stuffy annex. I can't believe my luck, being cooped up in this tiny space with my annoying family and these strangers. My mother is constantly nagging me, complaining about my messy room or my lack of ambition. As if I want to be anything other than a regular teenage boy. I guess being the youngest in this annex doesn't help either. No one takes me seriously, they all treat me like a child.

Anne is the worst of them all. I mean, what's her deal? She never shuts up, always going on about her dreams and aspirations. Well, I have dreams too, you know? I dream of being free, of playing outside and breathing fresh air. But no, I'm stuck in here with her and my boring parents. At least Margot keeps to herself, sitting silently in the corner with her nose in a book. I wish I could escape into a world of words like she does.

Every day feels like a never-ending cycle of boredom and frustration. I miss my friends, I miss going out, I miss being normal. But no, I have to hide here like some sort of fugitive. And for what? To escape the Nazis? Sometimes I wonder if it's even worth it. Life in here is so stifling, so suffocating. I just want it to end.

Response:

In rewriting the journal entry from Peter's perspective, the tone of the entry has significantly changed. The original entry, written from Anne's perspective, had a more hopeful and optimistic tone, reflecting her resilient spirit and determination to find beauty even in their dire circumstances. However, in Peter's perspective, the tone becomes more despondent and frustrated. This change in tone is intentional as it provides insight into Peter's personality traits and viewpoints. Peter is depicted as someone who feels trapped and suffocated in the annex, yearning for freedom and normalcy. He holds a pessimistic view of their situation and struggles with feeling insignificant as the youngest member. By shifting the tone, I aim to highlight Peter's internal struggles and shed light on the different perspectives within the annex.

To rewrite a journal entry from the perspective of a resident of the annex (other than Anne), you should first choose a specific individual you want to focus on. Consider the different personalities and viewpoints of the other residents, such as Otto Frank, Margot Frank, Edith Frank, Peter van Pels, or Mrs. van Pels.

Once you have chosen a character, immerse yourself in their mindset and thoughts. Begin writing the journal entry using first-person pronouns to refer to this individual, not yourself. For example, if you choose Margot Frank, you would use "I," "me," and "my" throughout the entry.

Adopt a tone that reflects the character's personality and emotions. Consider how they would realistically feel about the subject matter they are discussing. You can refer to any information or hints about the character's traits and viewpoints that are provided in the source materials you have been given.

If you choose to rewrite Tuesday, July 13, 1943, you could explore the thoughts and emotions of the chosen character during that specific day in the annex. Alternatively, if you choose to rewrite Friday, October 29, 1943, you could explore their perspective on that particular day.

After completing your rewritten journal entry, write a separate paragraph (around 6-8 sentences) to explain how you changed the tone and why you made those changes. Reflect on the character's personality traits and viewpoints, and consider how these influenced the tone of your entry. Explain the reasons behind the changes you made, such as wanting to accurately depict the character's emotions or provide a fresh perspective on the events happening in the annex.

Remember to cite any relevant information or quotes from the source materials to support your choices and to provide a deeper understanding of the character's perspective.

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