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I’d like the fifth speaker to come to the podium to give a speech in favor of watching TV. She will summarize her team’s argument. Thank you. Next, the last speaker will come to the podium and make a speech in opposition to watching TV. All is finished. Thank you for your cooperation. Who is the winner? If you think the pros team is the winner, raise your hand. If you think the cons team is the winner, raise your hand. 15 students think that the pros team is the winner. 17 students thank that the cons team is the winner. So the winner is the pros team at this debate contest.
I’d like the fifth speaker to come to the podium to give a speech in favor of watching TV. She will summarize her team’s argument. Thank you. Next, the last speaker will come to the podium and make a speech in opposition to watching TV. All is finished. Thank you for your cooperation. Who is the winner? If you think the pros team is the winner, raise your hand. If you think the cons team is the winner, raise your hand. Fifteen students think that the pros team is the winner. Seventeen students think that the cons team is the winner. So the winner is the cons team at this debate contest.
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Sure, I'll check the passage for you:
I'd like the fifth speaker to come to the podium to give a speech in favor of watching TV. She will summarize her team's argument. Thank you. Next, the last speaker will come to the podium and make a speech in opposition to watching TV. All is finished. Thank you for your cooperation. Who is the winner? If you think the pros team is the winner, raise your hand. If you think the cons team is the winner, raise your hand. 15 students think that the pros team is the winner. 17 students think that the cons team is the winner. So, the winner is the pros team at this debate contest.
The passage appears to be about a debate contest where students are discussing the topic of watching TV. The fifth speaker is in favor of watching TV and will summarize her team's argument. The last speaker will then present arguments against watching TV. The passage concludes by stating that the pros team is the winner based on the raised hands of the students: 15 students think the pros team is the winner, while 17 students think the cons team is the winner.
The passage seems fine, although there is a minor typo ("thank" instead of "think") in the sentence "17 students thank that the cons team is the winner." Apart from this, the passage effectively communicates the sequence of the debate and the determination of the winner based on the students' opinions.